I hope everything is alright with you ! I just wanted to check if everything is alright as the link to your tumblr leads to an empty page, your blog seems to be gone. If you choose to do so, then do take care nonetheless :)
I've been working on the next update which I plan to publish in february.
Regarding my tumbrl blog, I've been "suspended" with no reasons given whatsoever. I just found out about it a few days back when I planned to answer the pilling asks and update everyone on my progress.
If Tumbrl doesn't respond to me, I will make a new one in a week.
Thank you so much for being as kind as to check on me!
Since there isn't a comment yet, I have to say this was well written and with compelling characters, and how everything else seems to flow along together.
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The prologue was enough to pull me in (I'm an avid reader and VN/ IF player) as Rael and MC are complicated at best at the moment as I try to explore their ambiguous relationship, but it's too early to tell atm lmao. Maybe he's keeping tabs on MC? Who knows? Also when I was reading the first chapter I do have some theory that MC and their friend, Darya, from childhood are being use either for selfish purpose as getting the Crown leverage/ power for personal gains, since their potential are expandable. But damn the class differences for MC and the rest of the people though, I feel like it's gonna one hell of a time for them in the next update. I could already smell a lot of foolery and discrimination going on with how much MC despised Tirav in the past and even in their current time.
Almost forgot about MC's mother, was thinking that she was probably told to stay away, a.k.a. threatened or something if she haven't return for so long. Either the Crown fear or thinks that if the mom do somehow shows up, MC might start getting ideas of running away way earlier or distracted.
Anyway, stay safe and rest well!
Edit: Forgot to ask if you have twitter or tumblr or any social media form to post or update the progress of the game whenever?
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Oooooh when will be the next update ? I love it !
When you first meet Yasir, when he tells you about the thieves, you have his name as Anwar for some of the Saloon portion
Thank you! I'm sorry but I couldn't find it.
I found it!
It happens when I choose:
"I'm not playing this game with you." You cross you arms over your chest. ♡
and then
"Because this not the point of our discussion."
Screenshot just in case lol
So good i want more
Yasir makes me want to punch him so I’ve decided to romance him. He has nooooo idea what he’s in for. :)
This is literally how I pick my RO's LOL This comment makes me want to try this even though it's way away from completion. T^T
Hello author!
I hope everything is alright with you ! I just wanted to check if everything is alright as the link to your tumblr leads to an empty page, your blog seems to be gone. If you choose to do so, then do take care nonetheless :)
Hello!! I'm alive!
I've been working on the next update which I plan to publish in february.
Regarding my tumbrl blog, I've been "suspended" with no reasons given whatsoever. I just found out about it a few days back when I planned to answer the pilling asks and update everyone on my progress.
If Tumbrl doesn't respond to me, I will make a new one in a week.
Thank you so much for being as kind as to check on me!
Glad to know you are still okay author! <3
I just realized the pronouns are locked to she/her 💀 I have slow thinkin
Hello! I loved this story! Is lovely, I have a question tho, you cant choose your pronouns??
Okay i am already in love with Rael. Literally obsessed
Love it, gonna wait for more author 🥰
Since there isn't a comment yet, I have to say this was well written and with compelling characters, and how everything else seems to flow along together.
(spoilers and commentaries below)
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
The prologue was enough to pull me in (I'm an avid reader and VN/ IF player) as Rael and MC are complicated at best at the moment as I try to explore their ambiguous relationship, but it's too early to tell atm lmao. Maybe he's keeping tabs on MC? Who knows? Also when I was reading the first chapter I do have some theory that MC and their friend, Darya, from childhood are being use either for selfish purpose as getting the Crown leverage/ power for personal gains, since their potential are expandable. But damn the class differences for MC and the rest of the people though, I feel like it's gonna one hell of a time for them in the next update. I could already smell a lot of foolery and discrimination going on with how much MC despised Tirav in the past and even in their current time.
Almost forgot about MC's mother, was thinking that she was probably told to stay away,
a.k.a. threatenedor something if she haven't return for so long. Either the Crown fear or thinks that if the mom do somehow shows up, MC might start getting ideas of running away way earlier or distracted.Anyway, stay safe and rest well!
Edit: Forgot to ask if you have twitter or tumblr or any social media form to post or update the progress of the game whenever?
First of all, thank you for taking the time to give a throughout review/impression. It's very appreciated. It was fun to read.💛
Concerning your last question, I completely forgot to link my Tumblr.
Thank you!